Monday, June 8, 2020

Persuasive writing

Kia ora,everyone,over the past few weeks in class  we have been  learning about persuasive writing.Below is my persuasive writing.I hope you enjoy reading it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Altius
 Thursday 4 June
            Persuasive writing
Topic:We should use enviro friendly                      vehicles
             Hello!!!
         My name is Altius!!!
Today I’m going to talk to you about Why we should use environmentally friendly vehicles!!!!


People should not pollute the Earth.
Some people always use their car.
For (example)if you want to go to lake Kaniere in New Zealand,and if you live near lake Kaniere,you can just walk or cycle there.
If you use environmentally friendly vehicles then:people won't get sick,like sometimes people breathe the smoke and get sick and the environment would get nicer and should be environmentally friendly because they are cheaper to run as well.
These are some important things about why we should use environmentally friendly vehicles!!!!



Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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